2010년 1월 18일 월요일
Reflection on slang poem
I think this poem was practically easier then other poems because it has simple structure and you don't need to use rhyme or those stuffs. It was also good because we could express our thinking. It was fun because we could use word that will not be allowed to use it.
slang poem 2
Old version: before presentation version
What are you doing?
What are you doing?
Ruining my notes from math class
My precious treasures
You Devil!
Your laughter is annoying
as if a baby is crying like crazy!
What are you doing?
Done a huge prank
at the teacher
and pretending if I did it
You Monster!
Your smile looks like a Joker that
is pretending to be nice but
planing to kill me!
What are you doing?
Digging though my locker
throwing my text books
around my locker like a trash
You Demon!
The way you look right now
is like a rat scrubbing out
our household one by one!
What are you doing?
In my room,
messing up as far as you can
and make my room as dirty as a pig
cage You punk!
What are you doing?
If you touch my things one more time,
I'm gonna make you never
stand with your own to legs!
What are you doing?
If you ever dare try to
appear in front of me,
i will give you
a free plastic surgery!
What are you doing?
It's been 20 years since we graduated
and look at you right now!
How pathetic of you!
You failed your parents!
you failed your friends!
I knew you would bow under me some day!
Slang poem
new version: presentation version
What are you doing?
What are you doing?
Ruining my notes from math class
My precious treasures
You Devil!
Your laughter is annoying
as if a baby is crying like crazy!
What are you doing?
Done a huge prank
at the teacher
and pretending if I did it
You Monster!
Your smile looks like a Joker that
is pretending to be nice but
planing to kill me!
What are you doing?
Digging though my locker
throwing my text books
around my locker like a trash
You Demon!
The way you look right now
is like a rat scrubbing out
our household one by one!
What are you doing?
In my room,
messing up as far as you can
and make my room as dirty as a pig
cage You punk!
What are you doing?
If you touch my things one more time,
I'm gonna make you walk
in the shad for rest of your life!
What are you doing?
It's been 20 years since we graduated
and look at you right now!
How pathetic of you!
You failed your parents!
you failed your friends!
I knew you would bow under me some day!
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