2010년 1월 18일 월요일
Reflection on slang poem
I think this poem was practically easier then other poems because it has simple structure and you don't need to use rhyme or those stuffs. It was also good because we could express our thinking. It was fun because we could use word that will not be allowed to use it.
slang poem 2
Old version: before presentation version
What are you doing?
What are you doing?
Ruining my notes from math class
My precious treasures
You Devil!
Your laughter is annoying
as if a baby is crying like crazy!
What are you doing?
Done a huge prank
at the teacher
and pretending if I did it
You Monster!
Your smile looks like a Joker that
is pretending to be nice but
planing to kill me!
What are you doing?
Digging though my locker
throwing my text books
around my locker like a trash
You Demon!
The way you look right now
is like a rat scrubbing out
our household one by one!
What are you doing?
In my room,
messing up as far as you can
and make my room as dirty as a pig
cage You punk!
What are you doing?
If you touch my things one more time,
I'm gonna make you never
stand with your own to legs!
What are you doing?
If you ever dare try to
appear in front of me,
i will give you
a free plastic surgery!
What are you doing?
It's been 20 years since we graduated
and look at you right now!
How pathetic of you!
You failed your parents!
you failed your friends!
I knew you would bow under me some day!
Slang poem
new version: presentation version
What are you doing?
What are you doing?
Ruining my notes from math class
My precious treasures
You Devil!
Your laughter is annoying
as if a baby is crying like crazy!
What are you doing?
Done a huge prank
at the teacher
and pretending if I did it
You Monster!
Your smile looks like a Joker that
is pretending to be nice but
planing to kill me!
What are you doing?
Digging though my locker
throwing my text books
around my locker like a trash
You Demon!
The way you look right now
is like a rat scrubbing out
our household one by one!
What are you doing?
In my room,
messing up as far as you can
and make my room as dirty as a pig
cage You punk!
What are you doing?
If you touch my things one more time,
I'm gonna make you walk
in the shad for rest of your life!
What are you doing?
It's been 20 years since we graduated
and look at you right now!
How pathetic of you!
You failed your parents!
you failed your friends!
I knew you would bow under me some day!
2009년 11월 30일 월요일
I’m from the grand blue ocean
Somewhere middle of it
I don’t belong to one nation
No country that I would fit
I came from the Coral reefs
which i always wondered around
I'm from Vandorisom from cross the ocean
training down the road that goes forever
sometimes i had seen the leaves fallen
from there very own tree...
though they would travel around the land,
having wind the as a fine friend
I'm from nowhere
or I can't remember it.
But somewhere in my mind,
while searching though my memories
i remember some one.
feel warm when I imagine her.
2009년 11월 29일 일요일
in the forest...
in the forest there was a roar
it was the furious and calm roar
when you walk through the forest
you will find a small lake
where you can peacefully rest
2009년 11월 15일 일요일
connecting the pearl theme
http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/africa/8219131.stm
While reading this paragraph, I could find the same idea that the story "The Pearl" gave us. As I know, I think the theme of the pearl was about 'greed' because Kino had started out finding the pearl in a way to heal Coyotito. however, later on Kino gets greedy with the pearl so he doesn't get satisfied with the pearl cost even though that it was enough to cure Coyotito and later on he kills a person. In this article also shows us about how poor people react to greed and what happens because of it.
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